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Posted by 01Glitch01 - July 30th, 2010


ok. i am going to be doing things differently for a while. one of my friends is going to be writing colins story, and posting it on his page while i will be doing Will's. We will still be doing the voting thing, and we will try to have the new part every other thursday. We will be starting this thursday. On our post we will include a link to the others post. They will still be part of the same story. There isnt anything to vote on this post, because 2 more (Will's and Colin') will be out thursday. Please vote on both. I hope you like them. Here is the last post about Colin you will see on here for a while.

One of the guards shook Colin awake. "Time to go" he said. He pulled Colin out of bed, and walked him to the door. Colin saw their battleaxes on the ground next to the small dresser. One of the guards blindfolded him, and the guards led him out the door. What's happening, Colin wondered. Colin noticed that they didn't go and pick up their weapons.

The guards were dragging Colin down the hall! Where are we going wondered Colin, What's going on? Colin was deep in thought when he heard one of the guards start to talk. "You and your team are going to map out an area in the east. You will not be able to train before you leave, so lets hope your good with a bow." Actually Colin was very good with a bow. He had gone hunting in the woods for days at a time before. He never missed his target.

"Hurry up," the other guard said, "The ship leaves in ten minutes." A ship? How far will I be going? "Hold on!" Colin said as he stopped running, "What if I say no?" Colin felt something cold on his neck. Then he felt the warm blood dripping down his neck, from where the dagger cut him. "You wont," said the first guard. Colin didn't say anything after that. He knew that he shouldn't mess around with these guys.

About five minutes later the guards ripped the blindfold off of Colin. They were on a beach with twenty or thirty boats. It was amazing. Colin had never seen anything like it before. The guards took him to a boat with three people on it. "Get on," said the guard. Colin saw him pull a dagger out of his belt. Colin was more than happy to jump on the boat. Not a minute after Colin had gotten on the boat they were off. How will I get back home? Colin wondered.

(no voting this week because of the change. sorry.)


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umm could you guys comment after you read it. i want to make sure everyone has read it before i post the next one

Well, an unusual twist for Colin, hope he doesn't die. Sounds to me like he was taken to some sort of prison, and considering the amount of boats, it was by someone powerful. I STILL suggest that you transfer this to the Writing Forum. It will get much more feedback there. Also, could you give me a link to whoever is writng Colin's side story? I would like to follow it too.

we will both be posting them on thursdays, and i will have a link on the top of my post every time we post a new one.