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Posted by 01Glitch01 - May 1st, 2010


The next part is finally up (i feel like an idiot now. i have been waiting for your awnsors, but i never put them up. here they are)

Colin woke up in a small bed. How had he gotten there? Where is "there"? Colin sat up, but as soon as he had he wished that he hadn't. There was an unbearable pain in the back of his head. Why did he hurt like this? The last thing that Colin remembered was the fight. What was Will thinking! Getting into a fight in the middle of town!? Will had been chasing the man down the street and then....nothing. He could not remember anything after that. He couldn't remember anything before what he was doing there either. He thought that if he remembered well enough he was watching while lying on the ground, and now he was in this small room with no idea where he was.

You could hardly even call this place a room. It was a small, windowless room with nothing in it but a bed and a small dresser. Colin looked around for a door, bit the only one was guarded by two fully armored men carrying huge battleaxes. Lying back down Colin slowly drifted off to sleep.

***

One of the guards shook Colin awake. "Time to go" he said. He pulled Colin out of bed, and walked him to the door. Colin saw their battleaxes on the ground next to the small dresser. One of the guards blindfolded him, and the guards led him out the door. What was happening, Colin wondered. Colin noticed that they didn't go and pick up their weapons.

Does Colin:
a) struggle and try to get away
b) let them take him wherever they're going


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B. and also, WHY DID I NOT APPEAR!?

you will soon i swear. i need time to think of how to introduce you. if you want more info on it pm me because i dont want to give the story to anyone else.

yeah B. thats good

Wens that new music from the 8th grade band concert coming up?

b ftw. stuggleing gets tyou killed william. also, i dint appear -_-

first off you did appear. i havnt named you yet. i will in the next one.
second, its not will its colin

go with a, it will add action and allow for a plot twist later. Seriously, go with a.

dude, when are you gonna post the next one

i dont know. im really sorry. i just cant start writing. not to busy. i just keep putting it off. im really sorry

The next post will be up friday or saturday! I already have it typed up, i just need to talk to one of my friends about it before i post it. (you'll understand when i post it)
Im sorry for the long wait. i just had writers block.