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Posted by 01Glitch01 - January 8th, 2010


sorry it took so long for me to get this up. hope you like it

Will knew that he didn't have any time to waste. He ran at the cloaked man, and tackled him to the ground away from Colin. They fought, throwing punches, while rolling around on the ground, both trying to gain the advantage. Will was doing a good job keeping the man on the ground, but he was overpowered. The man had thrown Will off of him and nailed his elbow straight into Will's ribs. Will was on the ground in pain, but he knew that he had to get up and protect Colin. He slowly got up ignoring the pain, and was surprised at what he saw. The cloaked man has started running away. Will knew that he couldn't let him get away.

With all the strength he had left he started chasing the man down the street. The man stopped and picked something up off the ground, and at that very second Will knew that he had run into a trap. There was a blinding flash of white light. Will stopped and tried to turn around, but he couldn't. He couldn't move, and he couldn't see anything but white. It was like he was lost and would never be found. Than Will saw a tiny red light in the middle of all the white. It was such a pure red, Will was mesmerized by it. Than Will felt a burning pain in the bottom of his leg. The pain was horrible, he couldn't stand it. Than everything went from white to black.

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Will woke up in a place that reminded him of a dungeon. It was a small room with one bed, a small dresser, and no windows. There were guards, wearing full armor, waiting at his door. They both carried a huge battleaxe. He noticed that the part of his leg, where he had felt the pain, had been bandaged, and it didn't hurt that bad. Will tried to stand up, but it felt as though his leg was being stabbed in the leg with a thousand daggers. Will screamed out in pain, and fell back onto the bed. "Might as well wait and see what their going to do to me", Will said to himself.

A little while later the cloaked man came into the room. He still had the hood up, so Will couldn't see any of his features. "You two can go wait outside", the cloaked man told the guards. They walked out the door, and closed it behind them. "Okay Will", said the man "I know you must be wondering what is happening so before I start I will allow you to ask two questions.

What does Will ask the man.(put the 2 questions in the comments and i will choose from my 2 favorites)


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well first of all he should ask "who are you" and then ask why he took his brother and why he hurt him and colin

1. Who are you?(obviously)
2. What do you want with me and Colin?

BTW, i would like to request a part in the story, please. Im just saying it would be nice, since i really like them. My characters name is just Dan, or Daniel since its set in meieval times, and you can choose the personality of the character, but i would like to be good, not please :) Thank you

ill think about it.

1. What the fuck do you want?
2.Where am i?

Lol bandwagon
Who he is ,and wat does he want with him and colin....

ok "who are you" and "what do you want with me" won, but eventually all of the questions will be awnsored. if you want a part in the story (like herodan) just pm me i will try to put you in the story. i hope to have the next part up by the end of the week