Well, an unusual twist for Colin, hope he doesn't die. Sounds to me like he was taken to some sort of prison, and considering the amount of boats, it was by someone powerful. I STILL suggest that you transfer this to the Writing Forum. It will get much more feedback there. Also, could you give me a link to whoever is writng Colin's side story? I would like to follow it too.
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we will both be posting them on thursdays, and i will have a link on the top of my post every time we post a new one.
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umm could you guys comment after you read it. i want to make sure everyone has read it before i post the next one